User talk:Sharifi03

Hey, I enjoyed your article as it helped me learn a bit more about the disease. It was informative and constructed well. Your references seem to be improperly linked though, you could fix that by linking the number after the appropriately cited sentence. Here are some sources that may help expand your topic. http://abcnews.go.com/Health/ebola-case-us-cdc-vows-stop/story?id=25873850 http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2014/10/09/ebola-suspected-macedonia_n_5960556.html --Skes7272 (talk) 23:07, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Your Wikipedia contains a lot of useful and interesting knowledge and content, good job. However you can add the diagnosis and prevention if you wish to expand your page in the future. You may find these two websites useful: http://www.theglobeandmail.com/news/national/canadian-made-ebola-vaccine-to-start-clinical-trials-in-healthy-humans/article21079505/, http://charlotte.twcnews.com/content/news/711764/former-ebola-patient-donates-blood-to-help-another/

Great topic, since ebola has been a very popular topic in the past month. I enjoyed reading your article because I never really knew all the information on ebola. Some ways you can improve your article are by maybe talking about where ebola came from and how many people it has affected. This newspaper article may help you out with that. http://www.nbcnews.com/storyline/ebola-virus-outbreak/where-did-ebola-come-likely-one-person-gene-study-finds-n191161 Another helpful website will give you information on Canada's experimental ebola vaccine and how it works, http://www.ctvnews.ca/health/canada-s-ebola-vaccine-how-does-it-work-1.1959082 --Jennifer mk (talk) 17:40, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Great topic, this is very informative and useful especially with the many misconceptions and misunderstandings about the disease. You may find these two link useful: http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-26835233 http://www.cdc.gov/vhf/ebola/outbreaks/2014-west-africa/qa.html --Khad333 (talk) 17:36, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

Given the urgency and panic surrounding the Ebola virus, this was an interesting read. The only improvement i would suggest concern your references. There are a list of references but i could not be sure what reference relate to what piece of information. otherwise, great topic. --Mispace101 (talk) 18:21, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

I thought that your article was very insightful and interesting. I found two links that maybe useful to your article. http://www.who.int/mediacentre/factsheets/fs103/en/ and http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-26835233--Floof3 (talk) 02:51, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Great Wikipedia page on a very heated topic right now. Two links you can use to expand on your material will be provided below: http://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2014/07/31/world/africa/ebola-virus-outbreak-qa.html?_r=0 http://www.thestar.com/news/canada/2014/10/20/canada_urged_to_transfer_ebola_vaccine_licence_to_bigger_company.html --Jjb2576 (talk) 15:21, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Given the recent Ebola crisis this was a good Wikipedia topic to discuss. Very insightful information and well written. Here are some additional links to help you expand on the topic.

http://www.foreignpolicy.com/articles/2014/10/06/the_toxic_politics_of_ebola_guinea http://www.hrw.org/news/2014/09/15/west-africa-respect-rights-ebola-response --ChanelKanku (talk) 15:28, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

I think your article is great and consists a lot of information. I think you can expand on it by talking about the spreading of Ebola in other countries and also about some survivors. Here are some links to expand on your topic! http://www.nbcnews.com/storyline/ebola-virus-outbreak/william-pooley-british-nurse-who-survived-ebola-will-return-sierra-n227131 and http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-28755033. --Mujtaba1996 (talk) 15:32, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey there, I enjoyed reading your article about the Ebola virus. However, I find that you could provide more information about this virus. here are some topics you could added and links to assist you. prevention, areas in the world with the virus. links http://www.cdc.gov/vhf/ebola/treatment/, http://europepmc.org/abstract/MED/868626, https://www.internationalsos.com/ebola/index.cfm?content_id=421&language_id=ENG--Waymondt (talk) 17:29, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey great article, the recent outburst and focus about ebola in the media many people are becoming more aware of the virus and are those in the health industry are now finally taking notice to this disease and are developing many vaccines for clinical use however, none have been officially released for clinical use due to the lack of knowledge and origin of the disease. In the article i provided http://jid.oxfordjournals.org/content/179/Supplement_1/ix.long, you will be able to find the first known case of ebola, which was discovered in 1967 south Sudan. This article may help you with the history of ebola and help people become aware with how people treated the disease initially. --Uoit lyons (talk) 18:31, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

In addition, i have also provided another source for your article to help individuals avoid being in contact with ebola in order to prevent transmission of the disease. http://www.cdc.gov/vhf/ebola/outbreaks/2014-west-africa/qa.html, the article i have provided in this link talks about ways individuals can prevent further transmission of the disease. Some ways, people can stop transmission is by washing their hands, not visiting countries that have an ebola outbreak and avoiding and contact with bodily fluids from individuals that may be infected. --Uoit lyons (talk) 18:31, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

Finally, in my last recommended source is the social media cite Twitter, https://twitter.com/hashtag/ebola?f=realtime. The reason i have included this for a source is because social media is one of the primary forms of distribution of information in today's world. Social media has helped raise awareness of the ebola virus and because of social media's impact on the disease health officials are now working viriously to prevent this outbreak and coming up with a cure for a virus that has been around for decades. --Uoit lyons (talk) 18:28, 18 November 2014 (UTC)