User talk:Shark2145

Hello, You have made a few modifications on the Makerbot page on a paragraph I have written. Some are clearly better English, but I think others are not appropriate, notably: Please refer to NPOV.
 * You replaced 'questioned' users clauses by 'questionable', may be it could be better written, but you shall tell that some people have indeed questioned the clause, not issue an OPINION as these clauses are questionable, this is not ok for Wikipedia.
 * You removed the sentence "Some are even considering the company is dying." which is the topic of the two articles in reference by replacing it by "This has caused substantial backlash from the maker community, which was a cornerstone of the company's user-base." which in addition to be an opinion, is not what is written in the articles in reference.
 * You removed the sentence "The expected market growth never show up", which was the topic of the article in reference, and did not replace it.
 * You replaced "Makerbot loses its leading place in 2016 to Ultimaker" by "the company has lost substantial market-share to competitors such as Ultimaker and Aleph Objects". Indeed, but the key point here was that Makerbot used to be the market leader and loses this place, key point which is now lost.

Regards PRZ (talk) 22:01, 19 March 2017 (UTC)