User talk:Sharksarerad/Gender roles among the indigenous peoples of North America

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The headings are beneficial and make the sections easy to read and follow. Headings will be helpful as well since it created the little “content” box at the top. That will make the entire page easier to navigate if someone is looking for specific information. The sources seem to be reliable as well since they are from universities and published books. I think if you could find some more information on the traditional gender roles that would be beneficial. It could help the readers to get more of a background before diving into their ceremonies. Linking some additional pages may be helpful to get additional information if needed. Maybe linking a page about The White Painted Women would help as I have never heard of them before! If you are looking for more to add, it may be interesting to know more about the specific garments the girls wear to their puberty ceremony. Xyz2345 (talk) 17:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)