User talk:SharonYubinKang/sandbox

The article has expounded TikTok's history and its corporate relations over time. It has also outlined a clear path of the company's development. Achieving that gives the readers a perspective of what the company is and an understanding of where it came from. It technicalities and failures overtime are also another aspect that the article managed to capture successfully. However, there seemed to be a bit of bias when the author spoke about the company's low points. The tone would lead the reader to think that the author has a personal stake in this whole ordeal. therefore, i would suggest an adjustment of the adjectives to sound as neutral as possible. In my reports i would wish to incorporate the preciseness of this author.