User talk:Sharoz Makarechi

Patton Oswalt
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Patton Oswalt, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept unsourced material or original research. This includes material lacking cited sources, or obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished synthesis of previously published material. Wikipedia requires that the material in its articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable (usually secondary) sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.

Also, when you use a modifying phrase like "which was a critic's pick in The New York Times", that phrase is modifying whatever person/place/thing is mentioned right before it. It's fine to say, "Oswalt was in an independent film, which was a critic's pick in The New York Times...", but the last thing mentioned before that phrase in your edit is Robert D. Siegel. This means that according to your wording, Siegel was a critic's pick, which I'm guessing is not what you intended.

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 21:30, 28 September 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Peter de Jonge, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:00, 7 October 2012 (UTC)
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