User talk:Sharron rodell

Changes regarding the death part
This is an assignment for my Women's & Crime lecture. Sharron rodell (talk) 16:18, 28 September 2016 (UTC) Sharron rodell (talk) 16:31, 28 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Hey there. Thanks for your contributions to Steve McNair. I'm a frequent contributor to NFL biographies here so I have a few of them on my watchlist. But a few things to note:
 * Wikipedia does not publish original research. What this means is that everything we put in a Wikipedia article must be attributable to a reliable, secondary source. You added that "Kazemi was a jealous mistress who took actions into her own hands. She was in love with the victim and believed he loved her as well making this a crime of passion. A crime of passion is a violent crime in which the perpetrator commits the act against someone because of sudden strong impulse such as sudden rage rather than as a premeditated crime." and referenced a dictionary definition of "crime of passion". While this specific incident may very well have been a crime of passion, a reference needs to be given to a reliable, secondary source specifically referring to this incident as such. The Dictionary.com reference is merely a definition.
 * Do not use articles from Wikipedia as sources. You removed the citation to the crime of passion article, but I'm just making sure you understand. Wikipedia cannot be used as a source for other Wikipedia articles. This is related to what I mentioned above. Wikipedia can be written by anyone, anywhere, at any time. While it's usually "reliable" for the most part in the literal sense, outside sources must be used for articles.
 * It looks like you were having some trouble with formatting citations. Citing sources and Inline citation can help with this. Also note that on the top of the edit box area there's a Cite tab that you can click, which brings up a Templates scroll-down menu that has options which automatically create citations for you.
 * I've gone ahead and fixed the citations, but I removed information that appeared to be original research. If you can find a reliable source specifically supporting the text I removed, feel free to add it back and I'll let you know if it's appropriate. I know this is all a lot to take in, but editing is really fun once you get the hang of it. Lizard  (talk) 16:58, 28 September 2016 (UTC)