User talk:Shawn Sullivan Depaul

Welcome!
Hello, Shawn Sullivan Depaul, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sandbox Draft Peer Review
Hi Shawn Sullivan Depaul! I peer reviewed your sandbox draft and I thought it was good! You have a good grasp of the law and its implications. One recommendation I have is to tighten up the language a bit. Non-legally trained readers may find it a bit difficult to follow and not see how one paragraph leads to the next. Lawperson2021 (talk) 22:14, 25 October 2021 (UTC)