User talk:Shaykip/Deforestation and climate change

You have lots of great and reliable information to include in the Wikipedia article in your draft. After reading it, I'm still not sure I understand afforestation and the three subsets of it. Try writing it like you're explaining it to someone who has no idea what it encompasses. It's hard to see how this information will fit comfortably into the larger article without seeing everything else in context, but it seems like you know where you want everything to go given that you have carried over article headers to your sandbox. JunoBear (talk) 14:19, 29 March 2022 (UTC)JunoBear

Overall, I feel like you added a lot of valuable information to your article. I'm sure that you have citations for everything, but for some reason I wasn't able to see the citations and references on my end, but I think that was probably just my issue! I don't know a lot about deforestation, so some areas that you talked about were a little confusing for me. I like how you mentioned adding a different map image in your sandbox draft. Adding or changing images is something that I forgot about, so I think that this is important to remember! I think a lot of the information you included is relevant and up-to-date, so I think that is really helpful in making this specific article better. Magmurg (talk) 14:33, 29 March 2022 (UTC)