User talk:Shaynavali/sandbox

Shayna Peer Review
Great start! I like how you acknowledge there is a lack of sources - it's helpful to not only add content but also to add citations in areas that need references. However, I believe the IED is a valid source - it will be helpful to find sources that support the information from IED but I don't necessarily believe you should completely discredit it. After seeing the Denishawn School article, I totally see what you mean about how unstructured it is. I think sections about their different tours would be helpful considering it was such a big part of the Denishawn School. I don't think it would be bad to take out ideas that appear unrelated to the article. For example, the pas de Basque section was interesting but it disrupted the flow of the article, so either find more information on this or consider possibly deleting it. I think you could also research more on the different dances that were produced as a result of the Denishawn School. But overall, I agree with your critiques and I think you have a lot of great ideas for improvement. -jhom22