User talk:Shc135

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I reviewed your article. These were my suggestions, should you wish to resubmit.
 * This article does not establish notability of the company. As written now, it seems like an unremarkable wholly-owned subsidiary of Toyota. Some ideas for additional content, and to establish notability:

I'd suggest adding additional content, and format according to Wikipedia standards. Look at some of the other articles to get an idea. That is less important, but would be helpful. --FeralOink (talk) 07:09, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Cesab was founded in 1942 in Italy. That was in the middle of World War 2. Was there anything significant about that?
 * It began manufacturing electric forklifts in the early 1950's: Was it the first to do so?
 * The company expanded out of Italy, to The Netherlands in 1958. Was that historically remarkable, in terms of cross-country European business or trade?
 * What about the acquisition in 2000? Cesab was purchased by BT in April, and merely 3 months later, Toyota bought BT. Significant, or maybe not.
 * There were multiple design awards for Cesab vehicles. I'd suggest including images of the award winning vehicles in the article, and explain the importance of the rewards.
 * Finally, and most important, you MUST provide neutral references. As of now, they are nearly all from Cesab's own website, or from Toyota's (the company owner) website. These aren't acceptable sources for this article.

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Cesab Material Handling concern
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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Cesab Material Handling


Hello Shc135. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Cesab Material Handling".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 08:03, 29 December 2013 (UTC)