User talk:Sheepreplicant9402/Faustulus/Jmoseley11 Peer Review

1. Lead Section: I think the information in your lead section is pretty good. I think the only things is that some of your sentences feel like they run on a bit to me.

2. Clarity of the Article Structure: I don't see any clarity problems with the structure. That being said your second paragraph especially feels like it runs on a bit to me and it's a little confusing to read. The information is good though.

3. Coverage balance: I think it seems like you are covering a good amount here. It's a shorter article it would seem, but from what I have seen there is not that much information to share on some of these topics so I think it seems good, especially with that section you were wanting to add.

4.Content neutrality: I am not seeing any bias.

5.Sources: I think you have some good sources here.