User talk:Sheilacnunez/sandbox

Sheila Peer Review
I think all your ideas of what to add are great and very necessary. It would be great to have more history on the topic and how it fits into I/O in general. When including facts about productivity and supervision, I think it will be important to stay neutral in your discussion. This could be done by including the reception or implications of the theory instead of just benefits. Implications might be better language than the current subsection. Citing textbooks and encyclopedias in addition to articles on the topic will help with staying neutral. It would also be a good idea to have a section just with studies or evidence in support of the practice. Overall, I like that you've chosen to help this article out!