User talk:Shelby.a14/projectdraft

Thus far it appears that you have migrated the existing content to your draft page, now it is time to get to work on your contributions. Pay particular attention to the sections that are flagged as needing additional information. Mosterbur (talk) 15:39, 20 October 2018 (UTC)Mosterbur

Project Review from Victoria Myers
Your additions to the Mexico section of your wiki page are off to a great start. I think you have a good structure so far. You have strong information that is critical to the information of this page and because your page was a little more developed, you follow with the theme that the page had already created. You present your information in a very well written manner and it is very precise. The sources you have used so far are good and reputable, however, I think that maybe finding a few more reliable sources to help expand your content would be helpful.

Response to Peer Review
Thank you for reviewing my project page. I will continue finding and adding more reliable sources for my content.

Project Review from JGardyne32
The additions for the Mexico section I felt were really well written. The majority of it was in language that anyone could understand and there was a good flow to the section. Something that might be interesting to add to the section would be to touch upon the conditions of the schools. There are various socioeconomic levels in different areas in Mexico, so you could even possibly talk about how the schooling is different in different areas. You could also touch upon how the schools are impacted by a lot of Mexican's trying to cross the U.S. boarder. Not really sure how that could connect but it could be something to research. With the Costa Rica section you could do something similar to how you wrote about Mexico. You could discuss the school environment: how a typical day looks, how the grade levels work, how the curriculum is taught. We learned about how in Vietnam there are a lot of privet schooling that interfered with the government schooling, you could look into if there was something similar to that going on. You could also touch upon the recess or physical education piece and how if they feel it is necessary in the curriculum. Over all I feel that your edits are heading in the right direction and being an Education major can help you a lot, already having knowledge in the field.

Response to Peer Review
Thank you for reviewing my project page. All of your suggestions for my Mexico section were really helpful and I will definitely add those pieces of information. I also really like your suggestions for my Costa Rica section. The points that you mentioned for me to add were very helpful and gave me a lot of things to look into.