User talk:Sheridaa/sandbox

Article Feedback: 1.) I like your use of evidence- you had studies to back up most of your sections. 2.) Very thorough explanations in each of the sections too. 3.) You explained the material in a nice tone that is easy to understand.

1.) There aren't any sources listed, maybe you have them saved elsewhere though. 2.) The formatting on your quote is showing up weird, but again, that might look different in the actual article. 3.) You could probably link some words to other wikipedia articles to help further explain some of your content. --Tfiascone (talk) 16:15, 19 November 2012 (UTC)