User talk:Sheridan.lea/sandbox

Hey Dani, you have a really great start to your article, but it needs a lot of expanding. A good thing to do is to go through each of your sources and pick out the main points you want to highlight in your article from that source. Once you've compiled a list of points you want to include in your article from each of your sources, group the points into different themes. These themes can serve as the different sections for your article. I look forward to doing more review after you've expanded your article. Best, Glasshn (talk) 22:50, 5 April 2015 (UTC)