User talk:Sherly-ann-Ville-gas/History of corsets

Hello, Wikpedian! I peer reviewed your article and your draft. I think that your article has a neutral tone and all the images that has are adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations. Also, I consider that the article with your improvements looks better but I think that needs a little bit more work. I suggest for the improvement of the article that the Lead doesn't have to be changed with just adding a description of those major sections of the article is perfect, and in the content I think that some citations should be added. Also, I think that sections of Etymology, Before the century 16th, the Victorian corset, and the Post-Edwardian long line corset need more information. I hope this help you improve your article. Keep doing a great job!