User talk:Shilingiyaua

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (May 17)
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KylieTastic (talk) 12:29, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Umra Omar (June 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chrissymad was:

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CHRISSY MAD ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  19:41, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Umra Omar (October 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 02:15, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

About your draft
As I said on the IRC help chat, I was looking through your draft, but it seems you had to go before I was done (real life distracted me). I get the impression that the content of the draft is not based on what reliable third-party sources report about Umra Omar. In fact, some of the sources do not even mention her, and the draft contains details that the cited sources do not mention. That needs fixing. You should also far more heavily rely on what independent sources have to say about her and much less on sources Umra Omar is affiliated with in some way.

Minor issues are that references should come after punctuation and that links to other Wikipedia articles should be added.

How are you associated with Umra Omar? You may want to take a look at the policy on conflicts of interest. Huon (talk) 21:45, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Umra Omar has been accepted
 Umra Omar, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Missvain (talk) 16:35, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
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Deleting of our personal Information on the Wikipedia page "Umra Omar"
Hello there. I am writing in regards to removing the personal information about me included in the "Personal Life and Family" Section of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Umra_Omar. I am one of the people mentioned in the personal profile of this article. I have on several occasions removed my mention in this article as well as my parents for several reasons as below.

1. Some of the website references about them include information on their workplace, and their phone number which is really unnecessary for this article. 2. They have no other public personal data about them or their children or my siblings mentioned anywhere other than our names on this article. 3. They are anonymous individuals who have not made their identity public which is a local website not known internationally. 4. Umra Omar has opted to vie for elections in a senior government position which has now exposed us to security threats and online harassment (Her campaign page is https://umraomar.com). Since our full names are in the revision history it exposes us even further and it will continue to get worse if she wins the elections. 5. Extremists terrorists Alshabab, who are against Muslim women leaders, have a political interest in Lamu, which is near the border with Somalia. We are very worried that linking our websites which also have our photos to this page expose us even more such that total strangers who might be a risk for us now know how we look. The Alshabab are always meddling in politics of Lamu and we want to make sure our family is protected at this time so that we aren't exposed to any of their kidnappings and attacks (https://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-27862510_). We are highly concerned for our family's safety as we are mentioned there by name in many of the revisions.

Other than this wikipedia article, there is no connection made on any relations between Umra Omar and the family members. Unfortunately editors keep reinstating the deletions claiming they are good faith additions. However these reinstatements could put out lives at risk.

Since the article is a biography of a living person, and the material is potentially harmful to use with the upcoming general elections in Kenya, we really hope this section can be removed. We would appreciate to please maintain our privacy and the separation between my parents personal foundation and this profile. Umra is now a political leader with a lot of potential enemies which puts out lives at great risk.

As such, we have written to Wikipedia as a family to request that any records of our names and information can be removed from any of the edit history of this article. We have tried frequently to delete the information but editors who don't know what pressures our family is going through are under have been reinstating it over and over.

We think it's within reason for Wikipedia to delete this information as there is no public information of Umra Omar's family other than this Wikipedia page. As such it is the only one that could expose our identity and therefore threaten our security. This is also regarding our online security since many of the historical information also references our full names. Considering all our names are very unique and not like "John Doe", it is very easy for us to be found through all our social media pages and therefore be harassed.

We really hope that you can help protect us from our family being at risk. Thank you!

Thank you in advance!

Africakenya (talk) 20:57, 19 June 2022 (UTC)