User talk:Shimamikeneko/Evelyn Leland/WithGusto Peer Review

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Thank you for the lovely review, WithGusto! You have taken a fair stand when critiquing my article. I really appreciate that. I appreciate your suggestions, especially the leads section. At this stage, the original article is pasted in the sandbox as it is, but I was thinking of adjusting the overall balance when I finished writing everything! I would like to change it based on your opinion.

I have added some content since you wrote the review. Especially the paragraph starting with "Leland has been involved," I am a little unsure as to whether it is related to the topic of my article and whether it stands in a neutral position. I would like to hear your opinion. Let's do our best together!~ Shimamikeneko (talk) 15:33, 10 May 2023 (UTC)