User talk:Shireofmurray

Welcome!
Hi, and welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed the edits to Shire of Murray and have brought them into line with Wikipedia's manual of style. As an encyclopaedia rather than a travel brochure, subjective words have to be avoided (e.g. "lush", "cool grandeur", etc) and it can't be promotional (e.g. "water playground") - it just has to state what "is". Have a read of our 'neutral point of view' policy and 'What Wikipedia is not' to get an idea. Feel free to drop a note on my talk page or use the "Email this user" link on my profile if you need any help - I'm based in Perth. Have a lovely weekend :) Orderinchaos 01:10, 26 February 2017 (UTC)