User talk:Shislegm

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Hello, Shislegm, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review You are on the right track with editing the article. I agree with all your edits about what to delete and what to place somewhere else. Continue to take out irrelevant information and make sure everything is kept in a neutral tone. I would add new sections to the article and provide more sources. Hennsr (talk) 14:55, 29 October 2018 (UTC)