User talk:Shivani666

"Environmental Economics" topic ok. AFTER DEADLINE. -Shirin--Shirin tejani (talk) 15:18, 16 August 2011 (UTC)


 * } Gsinghglakes (talk) 06:28, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

September 2011
Your addition to Environmental economics has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without permission from the copyright holder. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other websites or printed material; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of article content such as sentences or images. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. A fluffernutter is a sandwich! (talk) 21:02, 7 September 2011 (UTC)

Article Selection
Hey, Shivani666, I was going through the course page for ESS and I saw you listed that you are editing two articles, namely, Environmental economics and Environmental resources management. However, its seems you had pasted certain copyright materials on your Environmental economics article. I would just like to clarify with you as to whether you are still editing the article Environmental economics or are you just editing Environmental resources management or are you editing both. Please revert back to me asap as I need to update the course page, so that your Professors may be aware as to the status of your articles. Regards, your friendly neighbourhood Campus Ambassador, Debastein1 (talk) 21:01, 17 September 2011 (UTC)

Spaces in editing
Please add a space to separate the end of a sentence from the start of the next. In your edit here in Insurance you did not add a separating space when you inserted new sentences.

Likewise the quote you added in that edit has some grammatical errors due to missing and extra spaces. There are places where there is a space in the middle of words and there are places where space is missing between words. You may be better able to find these types of errors yourself by using the "Preview" feature of the editor so you can review the final version before saving it. Thanks. Joja lozzo  19:38, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

Use your own words rather than quotations
You added the following quote to Insurance:
 * “The object of every insurance contract is to place the insured as nearly as possible in the same financial position after the loss as he was before the loss. The insured is entitled to recover only the amount of loss actually suffered. The maximum amount of compensation will be up to the sum insured  or the value of the policy. The insured will not be allowed to make any profit out of the happening of loss covered by insurance contract. All insurance contracts except those of life insurance are contracts of indemnity. The principle of indemnity is not applicable in case of life insurance because no amount of money can compensate for the loss of life. In case of life insurance, the sum insured is fixed and it is payable on the expiry of the policy or the death of the life insured which ever is earlier.”

This is useful information to add but such a long quote verges on copyright violation. Please try to rephrase the essence of it in your own words. Joja lozzo  19:38, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I have removed the text in question. - Sum mer PhD  (talk) 19:57, 12 October 2011 (UTC)