User talk:Shizuye/Victor Arbogast

I believe that my article on artist Victor Arbogast is now ready for review and comment. Victor's notability is for his use of innovative materials in national and international projects as well as academic exhibitions. Thank you. Shizuye (talk) 17:40, 19 August 2009 (UTC)Shizuye, 10:39 am, 08/19/09

Hello. I need assistance/comment on my article on Victor Arbogast. I have changed my Inline Citations as Jezhotwells instructed me to do so. Victor Arbogast has also recieved an email confirmation from Joe Daly of //common.wikimedia.org that a)Victor took the photo himself; b) He grants permission for me to use the photo in the article and c)The photo has permission under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share-Alike 3.0 license. So I need to know what is the next step for the article to go forward?  Shizuye (talk) 02:20, 18 January 2010 (UTC)Shizuye 1/17/10

Updated comment
Hi, I have sorted out the mess. I don't know what sort of referencing you were attaempting but it didn't work. Try looking at other articles and see how they are put together. I expect you will need better referencing to establish the subject's notability. Take out teh guff about his contractor's license - taht is e irrelevant and your cite doesn't support it. I wikilinked what I could. Ask yourself - why is this artcile improtant to Wikipedia? - because I cannot find anything that establishes Arbogast's notability. If you move it into mainspace, itay well get WP:AfD'd. Jezhotwells (talk) 14:32, 21 January 2010 (UTC)