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Just-in-Time Manufacturing
Greetings! First, I'd like to thank you for the great work that you've been doing at the article Just-in-Time Manufacturing! Anyway, I removed the last paragraph from the History section, since I think it's somewhat unusual to include editor's own notes to the body (we should keep an encyclopedic tone). Also, there's currently eleven sources given for the sentence "Extensive JIT/TPS implementations may be found in many case-study articles from the 1980s and beyond, with some of the standout cases included in several published books and booklets.". I haven't touched those yet, but I think the right way to proceed would be expanding the paragraph / section, and scattering those sources among more sentences, don't you think?

WP:OVERCITE provides an example of five citations for one sentence, and considers it to be "over citation", let alone the eleven citations we are having right now. I understand your point though, and I think for those different misconceptions, we should for example paraphrase or quote the sources, and then add them for the particular instances. Anyway, I thought it'd be nicer to comment on your Talk Page individually, since I really appreciate the work you are doing at the article! Consider me more as a WP:MOS man, not so much a pain in the @ss! :-D Cheers! Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 18:47, 13 May 2015 (UTC)

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 * on JIT practices in Japan (e.g., at Toyota, Mazda, and Tokagawa Electric); another in Europe jmg Bostrom, Lucas Electric, Cummins Engine, IBM, 3M, Datasolve Ltd., Renault, Massey-Ferguson; and

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 * But, as with Goddard, Plossl later wrote that “JIT is a concept whose time has come.” Plossl. G.W. 1986. J.I.T. – fad or fact of life? P&amp;IM Review and APICS News, Feb. 1986, p.