User talk:Shormeli

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Happy editing! --Taweetham (talk) 03:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 01
--Taweetham (talk) 03:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 13:26, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 09:57, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 13:02, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 10:43, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 02
--Taweetham (talk) 10:43, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

Task 1 (WP:NOT)
 * Addition Special:Diff/934661703
 * Removal Special:Diff/933371513
 * Talk page warning: Special:Diff/926274646

Task 2 (Wikipedia:Edit warring)
 * Change: Special:Diff/928193796
 * warning: Special:Diff/869110648

Task 3 (WP:COPYVIO)
 * Talk page warning: Special:Diff/689014995/689699282
 * Copyrighted media removal: Special:Diff/689029908/690458554

--Shormeli (talk) 00:53, 16 May 2020 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 01:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 03
--Taweetham (talk) 01:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

--Shormeli (talk) 01:18, 23 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) My proposed articles are from the Category:Stub-Class Chemistry articles.
 * 2) * Aluminium acetate Talk:Aluminium acetate
 * 3) ** There is no structure yet, it is just filled with information in the main heading. I will divide it into sections.
 * 4) * Amide (functional group) Talk:Amide (functional group)
 * 5) ** There is no structure yet, it is just filled with information in the main heading. I will divide it into sections.
 * 6) * Aldose Talk:Aldose
 * 7) ** The structure is divided well. I will leave the existing categories but add some information and add additional category.
 * 8) * Amidine Talk:Amidine
 * 9) ** The structure is divided well. I will leave the existing categories but add some information and add additional category.
 * 10) For all of the articles mentioned above, they all are missing some content about the physical and chemical properties and common chemical examples that exist.
 * 11) * https://pubchem.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/compound/Aluminum-acetate
 * 12) * https://organicchemexplained.com/amides-functional-group-spotlight/
 * 13) * http://www.foodnetworksolution.com/wiki/word/1111/aldose-%E0%B9%81%E0%B8%AD%E0%B8%A5%E0%B9%82%E0%B8%94%E0%B8%AA
 * 14) * https://www.sciencedirect.com/topics/chemistry/amidine
 * 15) * For the format I am taking in account of these two types of format
 * 16) ** Histamine
 * 17) ** Mica
 * 18) * Articles that I might link
 * 19) ** Aluminium_acetate
 * 20) ** Amide
 * 21) ** Aldose
 * 22) ** Amidine
 * 23) ** Functional_group
 * 1) ** Functional_group
 * ✅ Congratulations! This assignment is completed. --Taweetham (talk) 14:56, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 04
--Taweetham (talk) 14:56, 27 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Please pay attention to formatting and technicality of your edits. I have spent some time to revise you answer in Week 03 above as an example. --Taweetham (talk) 14:55, 27 May 2020 (UTC)


 * I suggest that you work on Aluminium acetate and use chembox to describes the three salts. --Taweetham (talk) 14:57, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Hi Shormeli! Thanks for your first draft. Here are some comments. --Taweetham (talk) 10:18, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) We will need content and references for this new article. I have put an example on the sandbox.  Please replace my text with proper content.
 * 2) Since this is an existing article you may copy your sandbox into the existing article.  I just noticed that ChemBoxes exist in Aluminium triacetate and Aluminium diacetate.  You may make use of the existing content in the article but you can create a new content for the third salt.
 * --Taweetham (talk) 08:39, 18 June 2020 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 05:03, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Taweetham (talk) 06:37, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 07
--Taweetham (talk) 09:29, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

ICCH224 Week 08
For your information, the grading is based on the criteria below: --Taweetham (talk) 09:29, 20 June 2020 (UTC)

Aluminium acetate
Hi Shormeli! Thanks for your edit on the page. Here are my comments at this point. --Taweetham (talk) 09:33, 20 June 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) The summary paragraph and the content below as well as in the chembox appears to be redundant.  Please consult the manual of style/example article and see how you may address this.  I guess you can make the first paragraph much more concise as the details are shown elsewhere in the article.
 * 2) If you can add more information to the page, please do so.  Otherwise, you may try to create a page for the third compound (aluminium monoacetate) instead.
 * --Taweetham (talk) 06:37, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Hi Shormeli! Please see your contribution of 2,558 characters to the article and the talk page of the article. Can you contribute by taking or drawing a relevant photo and upload it to Wikimedia commons? Also, please see if you can address the messages on the talk page. This may lead to additional content to the article. BTW, I see that you also drafted a new article in the sandbox. Can you tidy it up a bit more so that we can move it to a new article? The new article is supposed to be Aluminium monoacetate. Can you draft it in your sandbox? --Taweetham (talk) 00:30, 30 June 2020 (UTC)
 * --Taweetham (talk) 07:26, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for your time today. Here is a brief summary of our discussion. --Taweetham (talk) 09:39, 7 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) You can add figures to the disambiguation page?
 * 2) You can fix the figures that are already on Commons.
 * 3) We can create an new article for monoacetate compound. Link to it article. Reference to Sigma-Alrich, Wiley article and the book "Dictionary of Pharmacological Agents".  It can be created on Sandbox first and later be moved to the article name space.

Please do not leave incomplete sentences "Mordant" and "Medical Purpose and Mordant" in Aluminium acetate. This kind of things can be removed immediately by anyone when found on the article. --Taweetham (talk) 03:20, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Hi Shormeli! Are you ready to create a new article for monoacetate compound? Last week, we have looked at articles in other languages and feel that it is possible to create an article due to references cited in those articles.  However, if you are not sure about this approach, please check WP:NOTE. --Taweetham (talk) 02:11, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

Hi Shormeli! I ran out of time for today. These are the progress I have made for you. --Taweetham (talk) 11:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC)--Taweetham (talk) 11:48, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) I was wrong. It was not the disambiguation page.  I removed the robot added template.
 * 2) I moved your content out of the sandbox.  There are touch-ups that you should do in the article.
 * 3) Do you agree that the Set index articles article should be arranged by mono, di and tri?  I have swapped the section but have not swapped the chembox and the content in the first paragraph.  Please revert my edit if you disagree.  Anyhow, please document this on the talkpage that the order is arranged for whatsoever reason(s).

I agree with you and decided to arrange it by mono-, di-, and tri-. I have rearranged the chemboxes as well as the information in the first paragraph. --Shormeli (talk) 19:44, 29 July 2020 (UTC)


 * ✅ Congratulations! You have completed the requirement for Wikipedia Assignment.  --Taweetham (talk) 04:29, 30 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Could you please see if the chemboxes that I deleted from set index page contain extra information that may need to be transfer to the pages for individual compounds. --Taweetham (talk) 05:50, 5 August 2020 (UTC)