User talk:Shrino/Open Government Initiative/Melissawwang Peer Review

Feedback on Article from Melissa Wang
The organization of your Open Government Initiative was very efficient and informative. I appreciate the number of credible sources you were able to effectively embed and incorporate into the new article. Not only that, I think you did a very good job of including more sub-headings on topics that were not even brushed upon in the original stub since there were only two short paragraphs explaining what the Open Government Initiative was. After reading your contributions, I got a better understanding of what the project entailed and how it was brought about by President Obama. I think one part of this that was a significant improvement compared to the previous article was how much more contemporary information you provided. I would say, I think the similar projects section was not the most necessary thing to include for this topic since you could have simply linked the Wikipedia pages into the Open Government Initiative. Maybe you could look into how other countries are trying to practice governmental transparency too? It's up to you. Great job otherwise!