User talk:Shroug almutairi/sandbox

1.) I think that you made a concentrated effort of making sure that you were neutral, carefully choosing your words. However, I do think that you could be a bit more minimal in what you write while still conveying the same ideas, if that was something that you felt particular about. 2.) The one source you added in from the school's website was a good choice, since it is a direct source in regards to what you're writing about. Shroug almutairi (talk) 19:07, 5 November 2019 (UTC)