User talk:Shrutitople

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Hello, Shrutitople. Welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions! I'm Addbot, one of the other editors here, and I hope you decide to stay and help contribute to this amazing repository of knowledge. Wasimmogal2007 Alternatively, leave me a message at my talk page or type  here on your talk page, and someone will try to help. Remember to always sign your posts on talk pages. You can do this either by clicking on the button on the edit toolbar or by typing four tildes   at the end of your post. This will automatically insert your signature, a link to this (your talk) page, and a timestamp. The best way to learn about something is to experience it. Explore, learn, contribute, and don't forget to have some fun! To get some practice editing you can use a sandbox. You can [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Mypage/sandbox&action=edit&preload=Template:User_Sandbox/preload create your own private sandbox] for use any time. Perfect for working on bigger projects. Then for easy access in the future, you can put  on your userpage.

 Sincerely, Addbot (talk) 15:36, 4 March 2012 (UTC)  [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Addbot&action=edit&section=new&preload=Template:Welcome_to_Wikipedia/user-talk_preload (Leave me a message)]

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Welcome
Hello Shruti, Wel-Come to Wikipedia! --Shweta Shinde (talk) 09:46, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

A cup of tea for you!

 * Thanks a lot--Shrutitople (talk) 06:57, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

A bowl of strawberries for you!

 * Thank you --Shrutitople (talk) 16:48, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

Sandbox Reviewed.......
Hey I saw ur sandbox.... Some points for u....
 * The skeleton as you say is pretty well drafted but you need to work on your grammar a little bit, also ur data contains too many punctuation's (comma).
 * I have told u earlier that you need to start a new line with capital alphabets, do not repeat your mistakes.
 * You have only written some points and left it, you need to write it in details or atleast explain them so that when a person reads ur article, he understands it.
 * In the 'Need for Cloud Testing' section, there is some person named Tom, atleast make sure you check the data before you paste it.....lol
 * Your data quality is good, sections well created, add more references, add some images/graphs/flowcharts if possible.

Dont take this feedback in a wrong way... It is not to demotivate you. Trust me you ppl are doing very well just keep these points in mind and your article will flourish.

Thanks Wasim Mogal (talk) 17:08, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Sandbox Reviewed.......v2.0
Hey, Its good to see your enthusiasm for the article. I appreciate your efforts and hence won't delay in giving the review. The article looks in pretty good shape and you have added more references, thats commendable. You need to understand the proper way of citing the references, you can get more info at WP:CITE. To be specific your inline citations are not correctly placed, they should be placed after period or comma.Learn more about inline citations at WP:INCITE Make sure you review your article content from your professor before uploading the content on Wikipedia. Rest, you guys are doing pretty good and the first thing I checked today was for MR. TOM.. I am glad I couldn't find him..

Cheers...Wasim Mogal (talk) 19:09, 12 October 2011 (UTC)