User talk:Shs98/sandbox

New York State COVID-19 Response Draft
Hi

These paragraphs look excellent. I have no feedback about the content. Only some recommendations phrasing and linking:
 * I would suggest double checking is the use of names in the sections before and after. Specifically you might not need to spell out Governor Andrew Cuomo. I think Governor Cuomo is how the article refers to him throughout after his introduction toward the beginning. Best to stay consistent throughout the article
 * Consider linking to other concepts that already are Wikipedia articles or things that should be articles (like the Tenant Safe Harbor Act). We'll cover how to do this in a future meeting, but if you're eager to do it now, let me know and I'd be happy to walk you through it
 * Double check to see that your references have carried over correctly when you publish the article (easiest way: go to your freshly published sections, and click on the footnotes to see if they look right). If there are errors (which happens) you can either try to resolve them yourself or let me know and I can walk you through the process

Awesome work! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:53, 27 January 2021 (UTC)