User talk:Shunter12/sandbox

From Dr. Cohen: The Elder Abuse article is a great choice. I think adding information on emotional abuse is a great idea. See what you can find in the literature.

Ben Martin's Peer Review
I think that your additions to the article on elder abuse are worth contributing, but perhaps you could add to another section or expand further on the types of elder abuse. Although your additions still need further development, such as incorporating the sources, I like the direction that you are heading in. The sources you researched and prepared for adding to the article seem like noteworthy sources and it could be beneficial to draw more from them. After looking at the elderly abuse article, I noticed that the types of abuse are only briefly described, so you could consider expanding on some of the other types as well. The emotional abuse section certainly benefits from your intended contribution; however, many of the other types of abuse probably could as well. Since the types of abuse are only listed in a bulleted list, it may be hard to add too much more information. A couple sections, on the other hand, such as institutional abuse or financial abuse are pretty brief and vague, so these sections could potentially be explained further. The most important step is to incorporate the sources and figure out how to cite them properly. There are a couple trainings on completing this step that could prove useful.

-Ben Martin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bm06493 (talk • contribs) 23:14, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Response to suggestions
Thank you for providing feedback to my proposed additions. I have made the adjustments according to some of your suggestions. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shunter12 (talk • contribs) 15:30, 11 April 2018 (UTC)