User talk:Shwetaamyychawla/Home care in the United States/Shiz2theRa Peer Review

For the sentence "Pediatric home care for young children who are ill offer assistance for those born with low birth weight, chronic and long term conditions, acute physical conditions, mental health support, chemotherapy, and others."

We suggest changing to "Pediatric home care offers assistance for young children born with low birth weight, chronic and long term conditions, acute physical conditions, mental health support, chemotherapy, and others." Shiz2theRa (talk) 18:22, 12 September 2022 (UTC)