User talk:Shyamw1

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (February 19)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (February 26)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (February 26)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (March 12)
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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Shyamw1/sandbox. Thanks! Rankersbo (talk) 12:51, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: N. Gopalaswami Ayyangar (December 4)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: N. Gopalaswami Ayyangar (December 8)
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Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Shyamw1! I'm Wikiisawesome. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. /wia 🎄 /tlk 17:24, 14 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (May 2)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:13, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: User:Shyamw1/sandbox has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at User:Shyamw1/sandbox. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 01:54, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Shyamw1 (talk) 14:04, 18 May 2016 (UTC) Dear Robert,

You mentioned that there is already an article on Gopalapuram Parthasasrathy in Wikipedia. I have written about Gopalaswami Parthasarathy, not Gopalapuram Parthasarathy. They are 2 different people, both were foreign policy experts. Gopalapuram Parthasarathy is still alive whereas the one I wrote about, Gopalaswami Parthasarathy, is deceased. If you have read both the articles you will realize that these are 2 different people.

I also read another comment about not having enough sources in my article - I don't remember which reviewer mentioned this. During my research I could only find 2 New York Times artilces on G.P and a book published during his birth centenary. These are both reliable, published sources and contain the necessary information.

Please look at both articles on G. Parthasarathy (the one that already exists in Wikipedia about a different person) and the one I submitted. I don't know how else to convince you that these are not the same person.

Shyamw1Shyamw1 (talk) 14:04, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (June 3)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 18:23, 3 June 2016 (UTC)


 * There are currently three pages about people with the same or similar names. There is an article in article space about Gopalapuram Parthasarathy or Gopalaswami Parthasarathy, who is a living person and appears to be a retired Indian diplomat.  There is a draft Draft: G. Parthasarathy in draft space, about an earlier Indian diplomat, 1912-1995.  You have also submitted a sandbox draft, User:Shyamw1/sandbox about an Indian diplomat who was born in 1912 and died in 1995.  As far as I can tell, Draft: G. Parthasarathy and User:Shyamw1/sandbox are almost the same.  They contain much of the same language and appear to be mostly the work of the same author.  They are almost certainly biographies of the same person.  Please compare the two drafts.  Updates should be made to Draft: G. Parthasarathy.  Are you User:Wshyam?  If so, and you want the version in draft space deleted, you may request its deletion, but, if so, please explain why you are using two accounts with similar names.  If you and User:Wshyam are really two different users, please coordinate your edits.  Robert McClenon (talk) 03:06, 4 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (June 6)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 19:00, 6 June 2016 (UTC)

June 2016
Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at User:Shyamw1/sandbox. Your edits appear to be disruptive and have been or will be undone. Please ensure you are familiar with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, and please do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive. Continual disruptive editing may result in loss of editing privileges. Please try addressing my questions about the two drafts and the one or two authors, rather than just resubmitting. Robert McClenon (talk) 19:01, 6 June 2016 (UTC)
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Hello Robert,

I didn't intend to make uncosntructive edits and I am sorry if that's what happened. Can you please provide specific examples of the "unconstructive" so I understand what you mean? I was merely trying to add more reliable sources to my article since your earlier comment said I needed more sources. Also, I would like to know how to delete the first draft I submitted so I am not wasting a reviewer's time? I would like my second submission (the one with more sources) to be reviewed instead. Thanks. Shyamw1 (talk) 17:37, 7 June 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1
 * I am deleting the warning because I realize that I may have been harsh. We are both confused, and I am asking for advice at the Teahouse.

Thank you - I look forward to the advice. Any help I can get to improve the article and have it accepted will be greatly appreciated. Shyamw1 (talk) 20:57, 9 June 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Robert, I read Wikipedia's reference for beginners section several times over the last couple of days and I redid all the references as best I could. Could you please review and let me know if anything still needs correction? Thanks so much. Shyamw1 (talk) 14:04, 15 June 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

AfC notification: Draft:Gopalaswami Parthasarathy has a new comment
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AfC notification: Draft:Gopalaswami Parthasarathy has a new comment
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Don't worry about that phrase. Your draft has been moved to draft space and is still being considered. Robert McClenon (talk) 14:15, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. Shyamw1 (talk) 12:46, 27 June 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Just wondering about the status of my submission on G. Parthasarathy. Thanks. Shyamw1 (talk) 14:26, 14 July 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Dear Robert,

I am wondering about the status of my draft article on G. Parthasarathy. I haven't heard anything since my last submission at the end of June. Please advise. Thanks. Shyamw1 (talk) 18:45, 29 July 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Reply to your Articles for Creation Help Desk question
Hello, Shyamw1! I'm Wiae. I have replied to your question about a submission at the WikiProject Articles for Creation Help Desk. /wiae /tlk  13:18, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

Dear Wiae, I submitted the draft after editing the language by following your instructions. However, I'm not sure I did it right. Is there any way to know if I submitted it correctly or not? Thanks in advance for your help.Shyamw1 (talk) 14:01, 3 August 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gopalaswami Parthasarathy (diplomat) has been accepted
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Thank you so much. I wish to thank all the editors who have patiently guided me through this long process and helped me better understand how Wikipedia works. Shyamw1 (talk) 13:34, 4 August 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Dear SisterTwister, I tried searching for this article on Wikipedia but couldn't find it. Does it take a while for it to show up on Wikipedia? If yes, when can I expect to see it there? Thanks, again. Shyamw1 (talk) 17:22, 9 August 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

Dear Sister Twister,

When I search Wikipedia for the article I submitted on G. Parthasarathy, I only see the article on the other diplomat who is also known as G. Parthasarathy. I do not see the one I wrote about on the search results list. Just wondering how to make that appear when someone does a search. It is rare that two people with the same name also share the same career and that maybe the problem here. Look forward to your response. Thank you. Shyamw1 (talk) 13:44, 2 September 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1

It's there - thank you! Shyamw1 (talk) 16:53, 18 August 2016 (UTC)Shyamw1