User talk:Shylahray22/Violence against women in India

Peer review
Hey there! This is great. I think you could remove the bullets points, and you have the article body. Good job! Avery Miller (talk) 23:19, 7 April 2023 (UTC)


 * I'm going to do that, thank you so much!! Shylahray22 (talk) 15:23, 8 April 2023 (UTC)

Hey, Shylah! I agree, your contribution is very well done and informative. I made a couple tiny changes to punctuation, but other than that your research will enhance the article you have chosen. Well done! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mkurdziel01 (talk • contribs) 02:16, 8 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Perfect, I really appreciate that!! Shylahray22 (talk) 15:23, 8 April 2023 (UTC)