User talk:Shyrece.C/sandbox

Review from Dr. Becky
Both Bda1993 and Wmelancon provided you with excellent feedback! You have made a significant contribution to this article and I think you can continue to develop it further. Look at the overall organization of information (within and among sections), remove redundancy, be more specific with details supported by peer-reviewed scientific articles, and make a strong connection to the ecological effects. What word choices that generalize and be consistent with formatting. The references could be fixed by using the reflist code between two curly brackets –. Do look into how Wikipedia suggests how you use quotes in the Help:Quotations article. This article has real promise and I am excited to see how you develop it to the next level. I encourage you to look at science journals, such as Fire Ecology and Natural Areas, for additional sources about fire effects on ecosystems. B.J.Carmichael (talk) 21:18, 19 March 2014 (UTC)