User talk:Shyrtokae

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shylmagoghnar (February 9)
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Mach61 (talk) 23:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey there! Thank you for reviewing my draft. I have some questions about your declination comment before I adjust the article:
 * 1.About "Discogs and Encyclopedia Metallum are user generated, and thus unusable as sources". Noted, I was uncertain about that. I've tried to find out how editors of other bands have done this, but from what I can see they oftentimes don't refer to anything when listing a band's body of work. So can I assume that if I simply remove these references, the problem is solved?
 * Otherwise, may I ask what is considered a reliable source for existing musical works on Wiki? From what I can see, articles usually quote either Discogs or MusicBrainz, which are both user generated as far as I'm aware. I see AllMusic often, but that one is already referenced here.
 * 2.About: "interviews do not establish notability":
 * I did not refer to them to establish notability. This is already being done by citing publications directly discussing the band's work (though I could add more of those if that is the issue).
 * The interviews are there as citation to prove that the band has made statements about the things in the Wiki article. I've looked at "Good articles on Wikipedia" and articles about music on there do that as well, so I don't understand why or how this needs to be changed before resubmission?
 * Thank you for your time and have a great day,
 * Shyrtokae Shyrtokae (talk) 10:20, 15 February 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shylmagoghnar (April 22)
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Cambalachero (talk) 18:59, 22 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey Cambalachero,
 * I think you intended to write "only 1 of the 3 albums" right? If so, this is incorrect. Two of three were released by Napalm Records, which is indicated in the article, and the first independent one was rereleased on vinyl several times by Napalm Records as well (not indicated in the article because I couldn't find an independent source on that).
 * All the best,
 * Shyrtokae Shyrtokae (talk) 14:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Hey Cambalachero,
 * I think you intended to write "only 1 of the 3 albums" right? If so, this is incorrect. Two of three were released by Napalm Records, which is indicated in the article, and the first independent one was rereleased on vinyl several times by Napalm Records as well (not indicated in the article because I couldn't find an independent source on that).
 * All the best,
 * Shyrtokae
 * Shyrtokae (talk) 13:04, 25 April 2024 (UTC)