User talk:Sid900/Voatz/VillusionV Peer Review

Hi Sid900! The actual content is very good and informative, however, I am very confused why in the subtopics there is a section that is in quotes and italics and then a regular print paragraph right under. I thought this could be a one time thing but it is present for almost all of the entries and I do not understand the function of this. Is it plagiarism and you have intentions to fix it later on? One thing that needs to be improved upon is the tone of your entry in order to eliminate any potential bias. Overall, there is great organization of your article and clearly laying our your intentions for the article in the beginning is very affective. --VillusionV (talk) 05:10, 14 October 2020 (UTC)VillusionV