User talk:Sidetrackedsoph/sandbox

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you. One area that needs improvement is the choice of sources. Wikipedia has a specific policy about using IMBDb: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_IMDb. You might find this list of sources from the Video Games WikiProject to be helpful: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Video_games/Reference_library

Another thing I notice is that you are writing your article in your sandbox top-level page instead of an article-specific page. I think that will be ok, I'm adding this note so that we remember where to look. Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:40, 27 January 2022 (UTC)