User talk:Sidhira Johnson

Brain Storm
Audience 1. College Students 2. Sports Events

maybe instead of sports events could we could do parents with children! i think that we'd be able to incorporate that more smoothly OutroChi (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I think that is a great idea! Go ahead and make the changes.Ehoke5 (talk) 20:46, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Ranking Part

1. cost --> College students (cheaper the better) 2. time 3. brand --> Taste/Quality (i think this is also subjective tooo)

sounds good!Ehoke5 (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Maybe we should delete comfort because it is not addressing a specific group or audience, it is a good idea but for this article i don't really see a major purpose for itSidhira Johnson (talk) 20:57, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

yeah I agree, i will go in and delete it Ehoke5 (talk) 20:58, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Intro
introduce snacks, include hyperlinks to the word snacks and then hyper link every other snack. Explain where to get them, how to get. them.

Grocery Stores (walmart)

we should also include other grocery stores so that we can get a wide range of opinions.Ehoke5 (talk) 20:30, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Body Paragraphs
make sure that each of the subsections addresses the criteria for the ranking of the snacks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ehoke5 (talk • contribs) 22:55, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Included the snacks as being comfort food.

Audience??? Day cares, moms with little kidsOutroChi (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I think addressing a audience of parents with children is very important as the second audience because that one is a. wide spread group and two it can be easily discussed. I mean all kids love snack. foodsSidhira Johnson (talk) 20:59, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Included specific pricing Included brand names Included pre time (how long it usually takes)

Personal stories? - Left to hook readers on why to pick that snack

Lets not focus too much on personal experiences and try to make it more general. Like instead of saying "I always eat cheetos when i watch the Bachelor" say "cheetos are a great snack when watching any show, like the Bachelor"Ehoke5 (talk) 20:29, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I edited the peanuts post to make it less personal and more based on the ranking discussed. Sodell04 (talk) 20:32, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Because Alex is not here why dont we expand on her work and remove her personal by making it more generic. That way we can include where to find the snack, how much it usually costs, and of course the preparation time, which in this case is little too noneSidhira Johnson (talk) 20:49, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I think that is a good idea, we can also maybe include some of the health benefits of eating Popcorners since it is one of the only semi-healthy snack on here Ehoke5 (talk) 20:52, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Ref
Gave extra direction to some of the highlighted words by including other website links.

Sodell04 (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)==Ideas== Maybe make the sections about Popcorners a little longer and more descriptive. Also, maybe make the top paragraph about the factual information on pop corners longer. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sodell04 (talk • contribs) 23:21, 13 April 2020 (UTC) I can make the sections about popcorners longer.

RANKING
can we like put them from worst to best? and have the full ranking section at the end OutroChi (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Sodell04 (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Yeah probably and like at the end have a section summarizing it?

- Ranking from worst to best

1. Popcorners 2. Easy Mac 3. Cookies 4. Cheetos 5. Peanuts

Sodell04 (talk) 20:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Peanuts based on the criteria we have chosen would be the best. They are cheap, planter's is a good brand, and they have no prep time.

PREP

all except of easy mac have no prep

COST

peanuts - 60 cents easy macy 1-2 dollars

cookies - 2.56

cheetos - 2.84

popcorners - 2.50

BRAND

popcorners - not the best brand

peanuts - best brand of peanuts

cookies - tasty

easy mac - iconic

cheetos - well known

this from OutroChi (talk) 20:29, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I think cheetos should be ranked last place Sidhira Johnson (talk) 20:35, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Sodell04 (talk) 20:36, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Cheetos are so BOMB easy mac sets houses on fire Mic drop

I am not sure that they should be last because they are relatively cheap compared to other snacks like the PopCorners and while cheetos are not the healthiest snack, they are more likely to be eaten by college students due to previous memories associated with themEhoke5 (talk) 20:39, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Cheetos are very messy, When studying it can get extremely messy. Making it very hard maintain a constant study sessionSidhira Johnson (talk) 20:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

wear gloves/have hand sanitizer/eat them during a study break lol OutroChi (talk) 20:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

That is true, but college students don't only eat when they are studying, Cheetos are the better snack for a majority of activities that college students participate in rather than just the one activity of studying.Ehoke5 (talk) 20:45, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

^^^ ya i agree with that. even tho i dont really like cheetos myself, they're definitely popular w/ people OutroChi (talk) 20:48, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I guess you all have strong points, Over all I do agree now that it is in the right ranting post because of the three concepts that we listed. Even though it is a messy snack, it is a lot cheaper, Cheetos is a very popular brand, and of course there is not much preparation needed. It makes sense that they are ranked where they are because the qualities listed are all included and extremely importantSidhira Johnson (talk) 20:52, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

I agree with the rankings because most of these products are well known besides Popcorners, and most have distinctive qualities that make them better or worse than other name brand snacks. Cheetos and cookies are both very popular snacks especially among college students, so i dont think it matters which one is ranked higher.