User talk:Siena1018/Discrimination against people with HIV/AIDS/Morré Taylor Peer Review

Hi! I really enjoyed reading your Wiki page. The way you divided your page into sections was also really smart and easy to follow. Your sections on Blood Bans and the effects of Covid-19 on people with HIV were especially strong. Overall, your writing is very clear and has a really good neutral tone. If you wanted to, you could create a section that focused on racial disparities in terms of disease susceptibility, or perhaps you could talk about racial disparity when you talk about incarcerated individuals' vulnerability to the disease.

(Professor, if you are seeing this, I think I just put my peer review comment in the wrong place. I am don't think I'll ever be good at navigating Wiki. I copied and pasted my Peer Review here, but I don't know if you will see it) Morré Taylor (talk) 04:02, 20 April 2021 (UTC)Morré