User talk:Siewint/Cordelia Stanwood/Chasemcbee Peer Review

I like the writing and structure for this page. It seems to be well researched and composed. I would like to hear more about some of the topics that sound very interesting such as the breakdown mentioned, her photography, and the Birdsacre Sanctuary. There also seems to be a gap in information from the time of the information in the Early Life heading and the Beginnings in Ornithology heading. I like the direction of your posting and it seems well constructed.