User talk:Siffat05

Hello Siffat, thank you so much for your comments and suggestions to my piece. I really appreciate it. TeresaTeresa Varriale Gonzalez 04:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

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Hi Siffat, it's Andrea from class
I reviewed your page last week and provide the following comments: '''Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?''' Siffat captured multiple components of visual ethnography. There was nothing distracting. '''Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?''' It seems that Siffat kept the information neutral and not biased. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I think that Siffat presented multiple facets of this topic and did not overrepresent or underrepresent. '''Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?''' Citations are included but not linked in. '''Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? Sources include texts, and articles which all are current from 2013-2019. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?''' Not that I can see at this time. I believe that Siffat did (or is planning to) link some of this article to other articles, which would be a good approach. I would suggest maybe changing the order of topics with “historical significance” topics first, then methodology, then current state of visual ethnography. ACMwiki2020ACMwiki2020 (talk) 18:31, 8 April 2020 (UTC)