User talk:Sigarg/sandbox

I liked the part you added about the one child policy it was clearly stated and I didn't show any bias. One thing I would add to that section would be a better definition of what the one child policy is, as well if possible show examples on what kind of enforcement was used. I also think you might want to look at making a different section for the dependency ratio rather than adding it on to the end of the one child policy or you could leave it where it is. The part fits well in with the topic of the one child policy. Another thing I you did change hygiene section I would clarify more on what the pollutants are and that would be it. -- peer edited by Bashir Maaliki ==== Thanks for your input Bashir, I really appreciate the feedback. I think I'm going to definitely work on including the implementation of the one-child policy in that section as a factor to health and make sure to add on to/ clarify the hygiene section with additions to pollutants. -GabySigarg (talk) 00:00, 5 April 2018 (UTC) ====