User talk:Sihern Han/Paradox of fiction

Pre-move Review
Hello, I looked over your article history and noticed that you've done some good copy-editing, but not much else. You should know that we expected more improvements. Consider adding more citations and new text before Monday.

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Please let me know if you have any questions. 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 06:52, 14 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi Salt, Thanks for the feedback. I will take your advice into consideration moving forward. Sihern Han (talk) 08:19, 20 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi Si Hern this is your peer review! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sihern_Han/Paradox_of_fiction/Krystianagiron_Peer_Review 73.109.60.165 (talk) 10:48, 20 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi Krystiana, Thanks for taking the time to complete my review. I had a tough time finding articles that fairly addressed the thought and illusion theories and the citation that the previous contributor added for those sections were to a website that I did not believe to be an appropriate (reliable) source. Moving forward, however, I will spend more time looking for articles on these theories. - Sihern Han (talk) 11:00, 20 February 2020 (UTC)