User talk:Silenceslay/sandbox

As of 11/18, there didn't appear to be many edits to the page. For your edit in the "Glass Ceiling Index" section, you could go more in depth on what makes certain countries be high up and what makes certain countries be at the bottom. That would be a good and simple way to expand on the already short section. Also, make sure to include a citation for where the information is being pulled from. In the "Gender Stereotypes" section, you should explain the difference between the controlled and uncontrolled pay gap. I did not know what that was, so by defining it in that section before making your point about the pay difference it would immensely help your argument. Make sure that you also include your source you get the information from at the end of your paragraph that you are adding. Lastly, is there is a reason for removing the "Hiring Practices" section? Could you instead improve upon it instead of completely removing it? Ahaas2 (talk) 19:57, 18 November 2020 (UTC)AH

As of 11/20, there isn't much information on this wiki page. I recommend that you elaborate more on the "Hiring Process" section since there isn't much information added on that. You can, instead, explain why men are hired more than women in the countries mentioned in the article.
 * What are the different identifications between a man's work and a women's work?
 * Are people conforming to gender norms?

You can also add more content to the "Concrete Floor" section by explaining how there are a lot of women in those higher up positions such as supreme court justices. You could talk about RBJ & the impact she has had on society and in the world. Overall, if you make these changes you can have a really good edited wiki page! And always remember, Elaboration is KEY! Hannahjameson (talk) 05:50, 20 November 2020 (UTC)