User talk:Simoneta Reliz/A’s LGBTQ+ Communication and: Mental health, Patient and Provider Communication, and Health Disparities/Bibliography

Dr. E Review
A, good start here. Source 1 is not COMM. It is a good source (just not for this Communication Studies page). I wanted to hear a bit more on how you would connect the topics together. Please see Canvas for more feedback and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. OsaRosa (talk) 07:05, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you OsaRosa! Your feedback is greatly appreciated. I have already changed my source in my Bibliography section so I will make sure to do the same here. I will make sure to add more about how these topics connect. Thank you once again for your feedback and I will make sure to take notes. Simoneta Reliz (talk) 18:11, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Gen-Ash Review
There was a lot of I statements and I think that the focus should be more on factual points that are precise and short. Limit one source per sentence and cite the source at the end of the sentence. Be direct about the sources and I would even mention the name of the source while describing what the source is doing for your research. Gen-Asher (talk) 15:40, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Gen-Asher, your comments are greatly appreciated. I think you are right about the direction of the statements I will make sure to look back at it. Thank you once again. Simoneta Reliz (talk) 18:12, 16 April 2024 (UTC)