User talk:Simonle0175/sandbox

Hey Simon. I like the lead you have so far, especially the historical aspect of it, but I feel that is it slightly too short. If you add more details on what you will be talking about in the rest of your article, it will be better. Maybe you can add more information about the geographic distribution.

Hi there! I think that the best sections to start work on first would be the history, since that takes up the largest chunk of your lead. I think that it sounds certainly historically significant as a language, and I think you could also use that section to expand upon why it is so stigmatized that it is only spoken in the house. -Jacquie —Preceding undated comment added 03:36, 7 April 2017 (UTC)