User talk:Simplyys13/sandbox

Work Plan Zandra Rhodes article begins with only her name, date of birth, and who she is. Unfortunately, that doesn’t make for a very strong lead, because it doesn’t give any content on major sections the article with cover on Zandra Rhodes. I plan on changing that by creating a summary that isn’t over detailed but give a brief overview of the sections to come. This will alloq readers get an idea of what they are about to read. As far as content there is a lot in certain sections and a lack of it in others. Hopefully through further research I could find content for the sections that don’t have enough. The tone and balance of the article is neutral, the article consist of a variation of Rhodes accomplishments throughout the years. Citation is a major problem the article could use some work on. There is a massive amount of information of her career but a great amount of that information needs to be cited by a reliable source. For the sources that are there they function very well as reliable sources. I plan to continue my research to see if I could find more citations for the claims made that aren’t cited. The organization of the article could use a lot of work. Major sections were created but a lot of the information isn’t placed in the correction location. For example, the first major section its titled to be her early life and education, however, a huge amount the content is pertaining to the next section which is her career. I plan on trying to organize the sections to be a lot more precise and clear. Along with making sure the information placed inside of each section is relevant to the topic. There is no images of Rhodes's designs placed inside of the articles. There are a lot of descriptive words used to describe her style it would be a nice asset for visual images to display the words. I understand the reasoning of there being no images is probably due to copyright. I plan on seeing if there is a way for me to incorporate some type of visual imaging to help visual show Zandra Rhodes designs. The talk page for the article isn’t as active as I feel it should be, because a lot of editing has be happening recently. I believe that the editors should be more engaged with each because the separation kind of shows in the article. Which is why the article isn’t has organized as it possible could because there isn’t any active dialogue in the talk page. Once I start creating major edits I want to become very vocal in the the talk page. That way it could spark other editors become more engaged in the talk page as well. Overall I believe that Zandra Rhodes article has the ability to turn into a well-developed article. I hope that my plans to include a lead, organization, and inclusion of imaging and more citations could be the start to that process. Simplyys13 (talk) 04:41, 7 November 2019 (UTC)     Zandra Rhodes Work Plan
 * This is a solid workplan, with some detail. Please do the same with the annotated link list! Please see this fellow student's work for a good example. --Theredproject (talk) 04:27, 17 November 2019 (UTC)

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