User talk:SimsCity75/sandbox

Origins and extent of hydraulic fracking in PA:

Good information, very thorough and in detail but hard to read due to clumpedness. No headings, sections, or links to other wiki articles that could help define subject matter that some may not know ("Fracking, Richard Nixon, OPEC"). Needs Wiki in-text citations -Twilla

Peer Review-
I thought your article covered a lot of information and was good overall. While it was quite detailed I believe it was a little too much for the article. I suggest condensing some information adding some subtitles making it more appealing to the viewer. All of the details are there just choose what you would like to keep and would could easily be taking away. It is clear you did research and learned about your topic I enjoyed learning. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ajwst221 (talk • contribs) 04:20, 12 April 2018 (UTC)