User talk:Sir Jacob III/Central Valley land subsidence

Hey Jacob, I know your draft is not complete yet, but I after reading what you have so far I would suggest starting with a short introduction as to what land subsidence is and then why it is important for the central valley. I would then move on to how it is monitored and why scientists feel it is important to complete the body and draw it all together at the end with a neutral conclusion. Alma

Hey Alma!

Thank you for taking the time to review my additions to this page! I did not include an intro in my sandbox because the current Wiki page already includes a sufficient introduction. I decided to focus on the Monitoring and Infrastructure Damage sections, and add a groundwater recharge section to give a more broadened idea of subsidence and how it is mitigated.

Jacob — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sir Jacob III (talk • contribs) 04:54, 13 May 2022 (UTC)