User talk:Sir Roxas/sandbox

The article in general is well written, its good that you also changed and corrected a few things in the main articles that needed to be changed. The main problem of this article is its length, as you are around 600 words with this and with the edits in the Solar cells article. This article could also use some more links to other Wikipedia pages, as there are mostly only in the first paragraph. If there are no existing articles to link to, it is still good to create red links to encourage further progress in Wikipedia in the field.

The images should be there, but for some reason they are red links, and you should give a link in your last reference and edit your references description to be more in Wikipedia standards (give the journal, date retrieved and year it was published). Pijanamuha (talk) 03:12, 11 November 2014 (UTC)Pijanamuha

Peer Review (by Ben Harmon)
The majority of revisions for this article should probably be to make it longer. I feel like the descriptions of each type of architecture could be expanded. Maybe reference more sources to get more information?

In addition to that, I think you could use more links to other Wikipedia articles. Words like electrolyte and monolithic could use links for readers that don't know what they mean. Also, laminar flow should be linked the first time you use that phrase.

The pictures aren't linked yet, but I'm sure you're aware of that. And the references need a header. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bharmon13 (talk • contribs) 03:30, 11 November 2014 (UTC)