User talk:SisiShen/Lin Huiyin

I have reviewed your content and leave some small advice. The content added is informative and with clear structure. Please check your bibliography page because some links are missing. For the new content, cite your sources in the right way. Siyi Shen (talk) 21:40, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I have reviewed your draft and have left some feedback on it. Just a few things need a second look at such as the content information, links added, and proper citations. Good luck!